June 19th, 2014
The Waters of Iwingee by Griffin Keener
I
was invited to read this interesting book by the author a few months
back, but due to my little financial mishap in December-January, I just
put it past my mind. I definitely regret taking so long to pick it up,
as there are many interesting things this book brings up, and infuses
culture, what I took as particularly Western African culture in it's
fantastical setting.
There
were things I both liked and disliked about this book. I find that the
initial idea of this book is what would draw you in the most. But where
it struggles is it's editing. I will break down the things I liked
and didn't connect with, but first I will give a quick synopsis of the
book.
The
Waters of Iwingee follows the adventure of two siblings, which I take
to be African-American, named Kail and Mani, in a race to find a way to
help their grandmother when she falls ill. One would think this would
sound easy, but take in mind, the siblings are taken to a different
world that disturbs everything they know about their normal.
What I liked:
That
this book is heavily rooted in lore and culture from Africa. I would
suggest mainly Western African, but there are other smaller elements
that come from other places in the African continent. I probably havent
mentioned this, because I havent had a strong reason to(mainly because
she's never made an appearance in any books I've read) but my favorite
mythological god/goddess is Yemayah(or Yemaya).
Much
of the spirituality from Africa was lost due to colonization, and the
culture became distorted and demonized over the years. For the most part
European gods do the same things, if not more, questionable things, but
are often celebrated for this power. Maybe because Im a Black Cuban, I
feel so connected in Yoruban culture, but I found that the ideas and the
choice of creatures, as well as characters were good fits for the
story.
I
believe the presence of two black children in a fantasy novel, would
most likely instill confidence, at an age it's needed most. Especially
because one is a boy and one is a girl. Black children dont get their
stories told enough, but for geeks like me, I never saw myself in
fantasy growing up as a child.
The diversity in
the book is a strong point for the book, at empowering the image of
black child, with an unforced effort, if any. While they are never
really explicitly referred to as African American, well...You can kind
of just tell. Their names are slight giveaways, especially Mani,
who's full-name is Imani. Not a ton of white children walking around
with that name XD
Which
rings me to names. The names were difficult, but provoking, strong, and
demanding. My name isn't any type of African culture, but it's always
been mispronounced. There is so much pressure to name children or
characters racially ambiguous names, which really mean "white" names. Im
glad the story doesn't shy away from difficult to pronounce names,
because why can people pronounce the names of Greek and Roman Gods, but
deem African Gods or names too hard to try? The author even makes it
easier for you. There's a freakin glossary in the back of the book(which
I dangerously needed XD ) so it's not fair to say the names are too
hard to say.
I
found that both Mani and Kail were relatable. Particularly Kail. He
faces many challenges many of us face as children. Bullying, insecurity,
never have meeting his parents. Both children were without parents, but
Mani was older, so she'd at least known them before they died. Kail had
to miss something he never really knew, and that is frustrating and
heart breaking as a child to experience. I liked their relationship as
siblings, in ways it reminded me of the pettiness between my sister and
I, because were too childish to grow up when it comes to each other XD
The
title is also attention grabbing, and makes me wonder what it's about,
and suggests I will get to experience culture outside of this "default"
we've been forced to almost always pick up upon looking for a decent
fantasy book.
The book has good world building, and brings many mythological creatures to life that I dont get the pleasure of seeing much.
Things I didnt connect with:
The
writing style. I wanted to rate this book higher, because the premise
alone is what I typically look for. But I think it would have been a
stronger book with a harder edit. Details at time werent as clear as I
wanted them to be. And sometimes events I had to read several times,
because I wasnt sure how it had gotten to that point. I think an example
would be best to showcase this. Kail's bully Kendall, was picking on
him in his favorite class. Kendall threw something at Kail, but the next
moment, Kendall was provoked to chase him outside of the classroom.
There
wasnt any signs that suggested Kail had hit Kendall to provoke him to
react this way. I wasnt sure what had gotten Kendall so angry. This has
nothing to do with editing, but I wondered why very little was done
about the bullying, when it was painfully obvious, as it didnt seem as
though Kendall cared about having witnesses.
The
Point of view isnt clear enough at times. Many times, I would get so
frustrated, put down the book, and take some time off, because between
the writing style, the POV, the editing, I had several brain farts, but I
wanted to finish it until the end. The editing affected it's pacing for
me.
I
didnt give it any points for editing, but had the editing been
stronger, it would have been that much better. It would've been a full
point higher, as I find that my biggest issue is mainly with the
editing.
The
character descriptions are just ok. I found that a few white or fair
skinned(and minor) characters were described, but I didnt get a strong
sense of Kail and Mani's appearances. Kail supposedly had dark skin. But
I knew more about Mary/Yemayah's appearance and Kail's teacher, than I
knew about Kail and Mani's. Perhaps this was to keep racial ambiguity? I
believe knowing the races of characters is not a bad thing. While
people of color need to see themselves as heroes, white children need to
as well, so it becomes as normal for them as seeing themselves. So that
was my only complain with that.
The cover is just ok. I dont dislike it, but I dont connect strongly to it either.
I
believe I would have a better appreciation for this book if the editing
were much stronger. I would even read it again, and probably get
something more from it if it were reedited. It was difficult to rate,
considering I liked what it was about, but not as much as how it's
written. It leans back and forth between two numbers for me. But I think
the ending has me curious to know if a sequel is in the works.
Im not qualified to dream cast, because any actor I think up will only be preteens when I knew them as preteens(from the 90's, I dont know child actors by name now).
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